I like this private detective's attitude, how she speaks her
mind, and how she never gives up. Her case, her client, her friends mean
everything to her. She finds ways around obstacles and makes her case. It's
just up to everyone else to catch up with her.
That’s what
I wrote for my Goodreads review. Simple, to the point, but without the little
snippets of insight and language I tagged as I was reading.
Here are
the passages I tagged:
“I got a partial
plate,” I said, eyeing Ben. “And a quick look at a decal.” P. 162
“The car is
registered to a company called Fleet Transports, so it could have been anybody
inside.” P. 164
It was the
wide smile, though, that leapt off the screen and grabbed m by the throat and
held on. It was just a little too eager, too bright, too much wattage, like a used
car salesman’s whose very life depended on unloading a lemon he knew full well
had questionable provenance. P. 184
She was an
investment analyst I knew, one I called whenever I had to unravel high finance
issues that made my head hurt and my eyes glaze over. I needed the facts on
this whole policy-selling thing, not Spada’s high-voltage hard sell, and Lucy
was the one to ask. P.190
“Tomorrow
morning. Ten AM. Her home.” P.196 [smaller font for
AM]
He shot me a
confused look, cocked his head. P.225
“I should
take you in for obstruction.”
“That’d be a
bonehead move, and you know it.” P. 233
I didn’t
care how Spada got put into a cell, only that he got there. P. 298
I squeezed
my eyes shut, giving it a minute for the memories to settle. When I opened them
again, I was fine, or at least fine-ish. I squared my shoulders, centered
myself, and then jogged back to the car. P. 317
Why was
Spada being so cavalier, so reckless? I sniffed, froze. “Do you smell smoke?”
Whip
sniffed, too. “Yeah.”
We wheeled
around, sniffing harder, trying to get a bead on the source of the smell. “There.”
I pointed at the front door, at the black smoke beginning to billow in
underneath.
“Well, that
ain’t good,” Whip said. P. 329
I found all
of these refreshing and reminiscent of my protagonist. A great find. Yet
another reason for authors to keep up with their reading.
Now, if I
could only cultivate the higher level of character description as demonstrated
here, and by other authors I admire….
I forgot the absolute gem: Clark used "cohabitating" on p. 87. I've gone round and round with that one for ages.
ReplyDeleteThank you Tracy.